Serene OverloaD Game Story

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  1. Coldfirezz

    Coldfirezz New Member

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    Hello everyone! I am currently working on a story for my game called Serene Overload. You may read the story here: http://sod.futurestarhosting.net/forums.php?tid=22. I am looking for some feedback for what I have so far. Thank you.


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  2. lair360

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    Hey Coldfire! Good luck!!
     
  3. Coldfirezz

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    What did you think of the Story?
     
  4. lair360

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    Pretty good start. But, the missile part...its a little confusing.

    That is all...
     
  5. Coldfirezz

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    Thank you. I will try to clarify that part.
     

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