My criticism would be to get someone who has a good grasp of English grammar to proofread the site first. You seem to have a site that you want people to take seriously so it should be presented professionally.
For example, learn about apostrophes ->
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/grammar/g_apost.html
Now we are totally realistic and do NOT advocate any get rich quick scheme's or promise you that you can earn £1000's a month (though this is possible for truly dedicated entrepreneur's).
Example two:
... building your sites and maybe even writing a few articles and pages in these subject's.
Apostrophes are NEVER to be used to denote plural, which is what you are trying to do with "schemes" and "entrepreneurs". You use an apostrophe to mean possession, like "the entrepreneur's wealth", or to contract a word (i.e.
it's is IT IS and
its is possessive)
With all these mistakes, it doesn't really convey a professional image which is what, I assume, you're aiming for.
Also, your line of "your total guide for building your own Profitable Internet Business" sounds very awkward. I think it should be "your total guide
to" which is much more normal sounding (see
google results). And not sure why Profitable Internet Business is capitalized,
because those are not the kind of words you capitalize, but eh, whatevers. I'd drop the uppercase, personally. Though I do notice you have a lot of random capitalization throughout your site, as well...
