comments please

[gazzamc]

Well i've made my first site and i was wondering if anyone could like take a look at it and tell me what i can do to improve and all that.

the site is here:http://Gamez.exofire.net

I think i can take it if you think it's bad.
Thanks in advance

 

[Jesse]

Looks like you only coded it. If you do not know much enough on coding, i suggest you use a html template or much easier a cms. By the way nice site. Keep it up

 

[diabolo]

a much as a good bg that is, the text is still unreadable, making the website un-inviting to users. like what jesse said use a template, or get a cms. and learn the coding from that. you can also take a look at w3schools

 

[gazzamc]

Ok thanks for the comments,as i said it's only my first site so i still got a lot to learn lol.I've had a look at sites made with joomla and i'm goin to try and make a site using that.

 

[dcoates]

I agree with the others, You should use a template or get cms. your biggest issue is the text though. the readers will have a very hard time to read it. and maybe move your ads a bit so the wording on your background image is either totally coverd or compleately visable.

Otherwise nice job so far.

 

[gazzamc]

ok i fix the problem with seeing the writing.......So how is the site now???