Well you have talent thats for sure. You've done great with the gradients but id have to say that I don't see this as a website. Websites today arnt about overloaded gradients or shiny effects. More about simplicity and well thought out layouts.
Basically its a cool looking design but as for a website...maybe not. Some people may remember my website I posted a while back. It was simple and everyone loved it. Thats really what a website should be.
For some inspiration heres a awesome website that showcases some of the best Web 2.0 designs.