First ever site design!

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Please say anything you want about it! Please me honest:)
 

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diabolo

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the black and green stuff there, doesn't blend into the greyish bg .
4/10
 

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look good , but i think that the color is too dark, u can put more light color
 

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The colors are fine but you really need to work on alignment. And try to make the edges of the ovals less choppy. 3/10
 

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get the border straights :)

Nice and clean simple layout, small good for beginner. Keep experimenting ;)
Btw ive been watching your layouts. Dont be fooled by comments or be put down! Keep on going and you'll get better ;)

Your on the right track mate!

m1nd
 
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Looks ok.
The arrow thing that "My Blog" is in doesn't look to good.
Move anything that is hiding the border so it is visible.
Center the titles more.
Get rid of the shadow under the search box.

Much better than I could have done.
 

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I think you may need to work on the background itself, since a dull green isn't really matching with gray. I guess you could use a different shade of green, something striking/shocking will do. ^.~ And.. straighten those borders since the content are pretty much out of the line. ^^ It's a nice layout for your first attempt by the way. :pigeon:
 

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It's a bit simple, but sometimes simple is better :).

Anyway it's quite good seeming as you say it's your first design ;)

6/10.
 

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Pretty good work!

The only nitpick i have is that the reflections of the links at the top is all weird looking. It almost looks like the reflective surface and the reflections themselves are on different planes; like the reflections start behind the actual text. Also, they're too strong; they should fade out a little bit more.
 

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7/10

Not quite your professional website however I do think that people would use it as a template if it were a forum skin since there aren't to many great dark skins out there.
 

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the text reflection on the menu is a bit messed up and the boxes and whatnot look a little small to hold content. overall i like the color scheme and stuff good job.
 
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