Help me by learning english

vnpadkids

New Member
Messages
5
Reaction score
0
Points
0
Hello everyone,
I'm vnpadkids, and my english is so bad,
so I want you entering http://tryyourbest.net to help me improve english skill.
Everyday, I post a topic which is made by me, and Plz checking grammar, vocabulary for me. If You have headphone, can you chatting with me via Skype.

Thanks every so much.
 

Twinkie

Banned
Messages
1,389
Reaction score
12
Points
0
Your English is fine from what I see. If you have Microsoft Office, you can type your posts in Word and it will spell/grammar check for you to a certain point. Here are some issues I caught in http://tryyourbest.net/2009/07/solar-eclipse/#more-22:

We are lucky to see it, because this event will not occur again until 2113 (at that time, we will all have died). Don’t let the opportunity slip, unless you want see it again when you > 100 year old.
Some photos I have just took from the news.

1) Sentences in parenthesis should not be capitalized.
2) There were some unnecessary spaces around the parenthesis and before the period.
3) In photos, a plural (with an s) is used when talking about more than one object.

I hope this helps. When you grow up speaking a language, it is kind of hard to explain how you do it :)
 
Last edited:

vnpadkids

New Member
Messages
5
Reaction score
0
Points
0
Thanks you so much. You can comment that version in my blog, because my blog is using for studying only. Thanks again.

P/S: Why can you comment in my blog without email and it's shown at end of comments
 
Last edited:

Twinkie

Banned
Messages
1,389
Reaction score
12
Points
0
Oh I forgot, its years old and I did not put that there!

I don't understand your PS.
 
Top