My First Flash Animation

[Matt]

This is my first flash animation. I did it for my computer animation class in school. Its called "trouble gum".

http://e-humor.net/troublegum.swf

What do you think?

 

[Chris S]

i liked it. it was kinda stupid, the idea, but for you first animation it was good.

 

[dharmil]

i liked it. it was kinda stupid, the idea, but for you first animation it was good.

yes it was nice how long did it take to make tyhat

 

[Matt]

it took me about a week to make.

 

[Spartan Erik]

lol random but your artwork isnt that bad for a first time
most first-time flash animations i see are stick figures, this is a much greater improvement

quality wise id give it a 4-5/10
i know flash animating is hard, and it takes months just to make a good flash animation (unless you've got a talent for it)

 

[Phil]

I like it, It's funny in a stupid way. Great work!

 

[Rising]

good for first, but idea was stupider than hell...

 

[SEÑOR]

Art sucks. but its pretty good for a first m8!

 

[moose]

I don't think you were aiming for quality on this one, but I'm pretty sure that you got all the baisics of making the sprites and tweens. Keep it up

 

[randomize]

Yeh that animation was very good for a first time.

I am absolute rubbish at flash.

I can make your bog standard stuff, like text scrolling, or lines moving across it like it was something old.

Which is easy really.

I mentioned in the tutorial section, but if need some flash tutorials there are some here:

http://www.tutorialized.com

Just click on the flash link on the left hand side of the page.

 

[moose]

I think all he really needs is better sprites. Other than that, I think he's advanced enough to figure out.

Again, good job

 

[Brandon]

Not bad for a beginner.