ok I'm really tired today as I was snowboarding all day so my sense of graphical thing is not going to be at the top of its game right know, but is that a little better?? I'm going to work on it some more later
it looks better still 7/10 because size (370x120) much less space to fill as well, try it and post something, i would like to see it, you could be good (inspiring words from rising)