opinions on this design

[-fedexer-]

Well this is the first proper webdesign i am currently working on , and i'm wondering what people think, note the colour scheme kinda just flows, as i was building the shape etc in gray/whites/blacks and now i think the colour just seems to work but i want others opinions.

ratings? comments? criticism?

Note: it isn't finished, just wondering what people think of it just now.

 

[hopper]

i would say a bit more like this but otherwise fine

 

[-fedexer-]

Yeah, i still hadn't decided what im doing with the top bars iah, so you reckon it should be continued straight across?

And what about the colours , is it too bland? (notw this is going to become a school website, so it can't be too flashy)

 

[AirNike]

PersonallyI don't know where you plan on going with it. I think you should put a little artistic twist to it.

 

[Nathan H]

I think this is rather nice actually i wish my collage site was like it, not too bland, white/grey seems to be a standard for professional sites, flows nicely, maybe you could put a scroller in that top bar for news etc.

 

[g-force]

looks more like an outline rather than a design