preset gray

[JuniorD]

something i made to release boredom.

http://ocdesigns.pcriot.com/presetgray/index.html

Critiquing myself:

Text seems to blend in too well..
(I may fix that if someone wants to buy it. Im too lazy to fix it)

 

[TechAsh]

The text colour is too close to the background colour, it's very hard to read. Also there are some HTML validation errors:
http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http://ocdesigns.pcriot.com/presetgray/index.html

 

[Daniel S]

I would rate it 3/10 because the design is great but too light. You need to make it darker and the text needs to be much darker so you can read it.

If you made those alteration I would rate it 8/10.

-comphelp.

 

[JuniorD]

*read my critique.* im too lazy to fix it right now. i did that late night when nothin was happening.

 

[diabolo]

I think you should change the font-family to a sans-serif.. I just never liked the way the websites look with a serif-font