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AnimaVex

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Hey guys. I just finally put out Version 1 of my site and am looking at layout tutorials for Version 2.

Anyways, I have a PHPBB forum installed from the phpbb.com, and easy navigation to pages.

StrickenStudios
 

Jesse

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Nice, I like the splash page of your site. As well as the main site. I would rate your site 8/10
 

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The site looks really good. I like the simple template. A few comments, your last three links on the site are broken and the enter site page seems kind of unnessesary and annouying, so try to avoid having it.

Apart from that the site look great. :biggrin:
 

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awsome site. By any chance is thi s template you have made in photoshop and then just used image mapping to make the links work?
 

AnimaVex

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The site looks really good. I like the simple template. A few comments, your last three links on the site are broken and the enter site page seems kind of unnessesary and annouying, so try to avoid having it.

Apart from that the site look great. :biggrin:

Well, it's because I'm testing Version 2 of the site, and I haven't made the 3 last pages. I am going to put out an under construction art for the other 3 pages.

awsome site. By any chance is thi s template you have made in photoshop and then just used image mapping to make the links work?

It's a downloaded template that I tweaked. It's not official, but it's to give me ideas to make in Photoshop.

Anyways, I'm glad you all like my website and I'm really looking forward to getting it out there/
 

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Don't feel bad from the comments below. I've been doing website templates for high companies for 4 years now.

Domain Name:

1) domain name should be short ( I think that strickenstudios.co.nr is a really long domain name)
2) .co.nr is also a url redirection service. the cons to this is that it inhibits SEO. Take a look at your source code by going ot View>Source in your browser. You'll see that .Co.nr has it's name everywhere in it.

Navigation Bar:

1) It's using more images than necessary. This slows down the speed when loaded. For the text, just use text. The Nav bar can be created using lists and no images for each and every link. The same look can be achieved.
2) Great Nav look. I'll just add a hover.

Header:

1) Move the header above the navigation bar.

Content:

1) The background should be changed to white. that makes it easier to read.

Overall Source Code:

Are you using all images for the site??? This is a big NO NO. You should code you site in HTML. I just realized that your site is cut up in images and placed on the page.
 

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Some suggestions:
- Splash screen inconsistent with rest of site (reminds me of MS silverlight for some reason). I think your site would be just as good without it.
- To decrease load times implement a little bit of PHP to load your menu structure up and then include the individual page content.
- Put in some JS that detects whether the "Top ^" link is needed and displays it accordingly.

Nice looking site, just a little slow.
 
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Comments:
• Is it really a good idea to use two hosting organizations? Your co.nr and x10hosting.com need to be synchronized better. For some reason, I noticed you use your co.nr more.
• Is "The Internet is serious business" copied from http://www.internetisseriousbusiness.com/ (ALERT! DO NOT CLICK THE LINK WHATSOEVER. If you did, just remember I warned you. I can see your temptation! I told you! I TOLD YOU! I TOLD YOU! Don't worry. It's not a virus. If you clicked the link, you owe me 10 forum points. I'll never know that you clicked it or not though.)
• The themes on different pages just do not fit.
 
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