WebComic - Issue #1 - Alternative Lawn Mower

[Wesimation]

Hey guys my team and myself have recently finished off a WebComic tell us what you think

Issue #1 - Alternative Lawn Mower:

Our blog is located at Wesimation.com so feel free to drop by and leave comments.

Once again thanks everyone

 

[oiwio]

lol, gary's mod

but this line doesnt make sense "Dont worry about it the grass is at least a foot long". I understand what youre trying to say, but end the sentence with something like "dont worry about it. The grass is at least a foot long there" or instead of "there" put "at my place"

And instead of "Why are you eating grass" put "why are you on the ground". Otherwise it sounds like the man thinks its strange that he's eating grass, and by saying that he has foot long grass makes it seem like he doesnt think its weird.

 

[Jake]

Think naughty.... *shakes head*

 

[azntechguy]

Ahaha, irony!

 

[Jake]

Oh, suggestion.... use text thats not so fuzzy, would be much easier to read....

 

[Wesimation]

lol, gary's mod

but this line doesnt make sense "Dont worry about it the grass is at least a foot long". I understand what youre trying to say, but end the sentence with something like "dont worry about it. The grass is at least a foot long there" or instead of "there" put "at my place"

And instead of "Why are you eating grass" put "why are you on the ground". Otherwise it sounds like the man thinks its strange that he's eating grass, and by saying that he has foot long grass makes it seem like he doesnt think its weird.

Haha yeah it is garry's mod and thanks for the suggestions, we'll certainly keep similar things in mind for the next one.

Oh, suggestion.... use text thats not so fuzzy, would be much easier to read....

On my end it doesn't look fuzzy? :nuts: :drool:

 

[ThePaintGuru]

Lol, very funny. Gave you rep, not that it's worth anything these days .

 

[Wesimation]

Lol, very funny. Gave you rep, not that it's worth anything these days .

Thanks mate for the motivation, I'm sure the rep will come in handy one day