Drawing - What do you think?

[Swiblet]

I've been planning to make a comic called Hellchild for a while now, but my Deviantart page has been sooooo full of requests =< I have too many things to do!!!

But luckily, I was able to find the time to make a quick preview. The only difference is that the actual comic won't be in color.

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The portrait of innocence is the human baby. Somewhere between then and adulthood, it becomes its own inverse. Why not have a head start?

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Like it? =) I don't need rep if you don't want to give it, I just want critiques please!

~~B3N

 

[Little_Cider]

i think it looks goood , but i cant draw so thats one reason why , someone else might say its rubbish lol , but in my personal opion good job

 

[sunils]

Good drawing

 

[Swiblet]

Thanks alot!! =3 I'll move this to the graphics/webdesign now, too many people have viewed this thread and not even voted on it.

~~B3N

 

[Twinkie]

Very good drawing and coloring with Photoshop. Also, great job making the fire realistic.
You should have centered the face of hellchild and I think you should make your comic in color.
This drawing shows a lot of talent , my vote was 9 stars.

 

[galaxyAbstractor]

nice. Did you draw that by hand?

 

[Swiblet]

Thanks ^^ And no, the lineart was drawn by hand, including the lines for the fire's basic shape, but I colored and made effects with Photoshop and my handy dandy...horrible...mouse ^_^

~~B3N

 

[tgkprog]

i did not like the teeth. too much space used by the teeth. hands look cute. eyes look a little evil , teeth are supposed to be evili guess but dont ... make the hand bigger and change the hand coloring or something to make it look less baby cute

 

[sunils]

Sorry, i was in a hurry burry to go to sleep. so didnt vote. now i have voted and what is that something anoying at the right bottom of the picture.

 

[score_under]

This is just amazing! Teach me to draw !

 

[Swiblet]

tgkprog: Less baby cute, huh? Hmm...not a bad idea ^^ Yeah, the hand sticks out too much. I'm thinking I should blur it a little and light it up with the fire the way I did with the face. The teeth and the eyes are exactly how I want them, though ^^ Thanks alot for the critique, your comment was my favorite so far!

Sunils: Something annoying xDDD The box at the very corner is my art signature - what I will put on every comic page to show it's me that drew it, and the thing next to it is the Hellchild logo. I am now thinking that I should erase that one, since it...looks horrible the way I drew it >.> But yeah, the box is there to stay. Thanks alot for the vote!

Score_under: NEVARRRRRR =D Lol, just kidding. I wouldn't know how to teach unless I've taken classes and heard lectures...which I haven't. I can't stand a controlled environment while I'm learning something strictly about freeness and creation. So I wouldn't know how to teach it. Just get Photoshop and experiment like crazy. If you feel like pulling your hair out from frustration, you know that you're on track ^^

~~B3N

 

[TechAsh]

I like it, good work.

The hand and teeth need a bit of work, but the fire is great!!

 

[Swiblet]

Hmm, you're the second person that said something about the teeth, and I, for the life of me, can't find a problem with them o.o Can you please tell me what I should fix in the teeth? Thanks!

And thanks for the compliments too!

~~B3N

 

[TechAsh]

I can't really explain it, they just don't look quite ... right.

Anyway I'm off to bed now, it's 11:00 PM here and I'm shattered. I'll see if I can find a way of explaining what's not quite right with the teeth tomorrow.

 

[Swiblet]

Alrighty, thanks alot ^_^ Have a good sleep.

~~B3N

 

[Sohail]

It's okay i guess, i give it six stars...

 

[Swiblet]

Well, it's better than 5 >.> Thanks!

~~B3N

 

[sunils]

Did you upload this content some where else...
Because i found it some where else.
Thanks for the infor that it was your signature. may be you could have changed it so look like your name written using handwriting font.

 

[Swiblet]

Yeah, I uploaded this onto my Deviantart account, which is HERE.

I sure HOPE that you didn't find it anywhere else, because if you did, someone robbed me D: If that's the case, could you please give me the link to where you saw it so that I can go harass the hell out of them? Thanks!

~~B3N

 

[inkblot]

I like it! It would probably scare the crap outta me during night time... but I like it! It's hard to find any unique concepts in art now a days. Then again, I might just be not looking hard enough. [I'm not looking at all ]