Been working on to projects this year, READ THIS

[ghotel]

Hiya guys,

Well, Im good at what i do and heres my to projects so far,

GP
We designed gamepenalty for fun basicly we had tons of time and thought why not, send your thoughts

Link: http://www.gamepenalty.com

HS
Hauntedshadow is going to be the ultimate paranormal website, I used to go ghost hunting alot and somtime this year going to start again, heres the previews (Not Finished).

Image: http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/mm254/cyber-fox/template.jpg
Link: http://www.hauntedshadow.com/test/

Please send your thoughts id be most gratful.

 

[andmcg1]

Overall, I love both designs.

They both use space effectively (no useless big top banner or anything.)

The HS one has given me a little inspiration. I like the way the logo intrudes down, over the menu bar. The main problem I see is the use of dark colours. I have a tenancy to do the same thing because it makes any images or videos look much more colourful and obvious. The top banner/logo just needs to be highlighted in some way. The whole page seems to blend a little too much. You may want to use some colour or just lighten the area slightly.

On GP, the menu buttons are a little too dark. The text should be closer to white, and the buttons lightened slightly. This just makes them more obvious and easier to read. Particularly up the top, where the background is grey and almost the same colour as the buttons.

But like I said, great designs.
And Good luck!
Edit:
Oh, the other little problem...

One major thing that a lot of people forget about when designing a website (me included)
The visited needs to know within the first 30 seconds exactly what the website does/is for.

I spent a minute staring at the front page of GP and couldn't work it out. Mind you, I am quite tired and didn't really bother reading much or having a good look around. But I can guarantee the average web user will do the same.

 

[ghotel]

Thank you for that, Great feedback there, Yh im thinking of a redesign of GP, make it more slicker ect, Your right i was actualy trained that "The visited needs to know within the first 30 seconds exactly what the website does/is for." aswell we all forget though , Anyways thank you hope to see you on the site

 

[Arkayer]

This is just something small, but it should say "We're" instead of "Were."

http://www.gamepenalty.com/images/adverts/advert01.png

 

[DMG Online]

gamepenalty needs more work, it isn't center and the left side is a little too small for the content