constructive criticism(review) tmondo.com

[tittat]

Hellooo
It was two months ago that i last requested you for a review.I recently made some changes to my theme and other stuff.So i kindly request you for a review.I want you to use constructive criticism

www.tmondo.com

Please Review the following:
1)Does the home page sufficiently convince people to go further into the site?

2)Does/can the site achieve its main purpose?

3)Navigation. Is it clear and easy to understand?

4)Appearance/Attractiveness ?

5)Typos and grammar ?

6)Images failing to load ?

7)Search engine marketing. Can the pages be reasonably well indexed by search engines?

Also Please feel free to make some bad comments on me,so that i can improve.

thanks in advance.

 

[JuniorD]

I review the designs. Others are null and void.

It took a while for it to load... Aha. Loaded.

The logo has a white line around it, most of the buttons have lines around them, the layout seems a bit, you know, jumbled. Theirs red text at the bottom when there should be green or dark green. Red text doesn't do well with Black & Green. Try to stick to the same colors, so don't go doing rainbow text in a black layout. Try to merge images with each other, with makes the layout smoother and easier to navigate. The rollover menus look a bit awkward, perhaps you should make them black. Don't use red rollovers.

Yes, I'm harsh. It's for your own good.

 

[tittat]

most of the buttons have lines around them,

Hmm i think this problem is only with IE .Not sure why.

Red text doesn't do well with Black & Green.

Corrected it