Enthusiasm is not interchangeable with initiative.
I was about to give you a somewhat encouraging basic critique of what is clearly an unattractive design - even to the untrained eye. That was until I saw that you'd received, and ignored a large amount of good advice.
I've been designing for a while, but I'm new on these forums - It's clear that you are new to both. No matter whether you are just starting out or not, you have no excuse for not taking the advice you asked for the first time.
People took time to reply to your first request, and you've wasted their time. I'm going to place a bet that you just wasted mine too - but I'd like to be proven wrong.