My site - feedback needed

[wishes]

I have site called Greetings machine which would send greetings on a particular day. Please check this and let me know your valuable comments so that I can improve it

URL: www.greetingsmachine.co.nr

 

[chabos_35]

Hi, i have a question for you if you want to help me. How can i add to my site "google ads" ?
Anyway i find your site very good.Thanks about your time .. CDoukas ..

 

[diabolo]

I got tired of looking at your site very quickly, I didn't even bother to read the full text because it just didn't draw my attention

what I saw from it was white space, a few images, text, and mainly ads

 

[frankfriend]

OK, so you are selling ads.

Make your text` briefer, snappier, state your benefits and what you do up at the top, don't tell people why they have got lazier etc.

Too many words

Not enough reason to come back

Registration took too long to even open.

 

[yakov-lev]

WTF lyjg401,
I can also give you long advertising in Russian or Hebrew.
Do you need that? Will you get that? Or it's all Greek for you?

 

[modlovecat]

Very small and uninteresting site. You need more of a description of what the sites purpose is, without having to read a block paragraph