If you were doing this for an ad or something...always enlarge the pupils. It implies sexual arousal and intentions of receptivity. The psychology of design...lame, I know, but it makes a difference.
mmm its ok but you should look for better rez pics to work with as this quality makes it hard to tell whats your fault and whats the pics. I can point out that the coloring in the left eye ( her right one) looks kinda funny / splotchy.
Other then that I'd suggest doing more to he then changing her eye and lipstick color, Like adding more makeup and eye shadow. Just a thought.
Brilliant phrase! I use it all the time. People always look at me funny when I say it though.
I have no idea where it originated, but I heard it initially on the movie "Christine."