Please review my new bakery site

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www.whitesailsbakery.com

Forwarded my domain to my x10 hosted site. Used a template and then pulled that template again into a frame.

Any suggestions will be appreciated.

Thank you
 
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Thanks for the comments so far. Yeah, lots of content especially in the gluten free area

thank you
 

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I like it, I think you should write some tutorials, I would read them :D

p.s. Under Welcome to White Sails... their is the logo, it seems pixelated, fixing that would make a HUGE difference. Also the left box seems a bit messy/scattered. If you can come up with a solid format or layout for that box you've struck gold. Good luck :D
 
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I like it, I think you should write some tutorials, I would read them :D

p.s. Under Welcome to White Sails... their is the logo, it seems pixelated, fixing that would make a HUGE difference. Also the left box seems a bit messy/scattered. If you can come up with a solid format or layout for that box you've struck gold. Good luck :D

Thanks, and you are right. I have to redo the logo and the left is something I am waiting until after Christmas to attend to as we are in a busy time for goodies right now.

Appreciate your close scrutiny :)

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Very nice looking, clean site. One observation on the treats page is the red text, for example, Lemon Squares, makes me think that it's a link to click for a picture or more information. Yes, I know it's not underlined, but I'm making a personal observation, so make of it what you will. I hope this helps.

~Futomara
 

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Very nice looking, clean site. One observation on the treats page is the red text, for example, Lemon Squares, makes me think that it's a link to click for a picture or more information. Yes, I know it's not underlined, but I'm making a personal observation, so make of it what you will. I hope this helps.

~Futomara

Thought of that and you are right. I'll change it.

Thank you
 
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Its a nice site. I would recommend you make the text a little bigger though, Kind of turns away the users who don't like to read alot. Maybe short Intro if not then bigger text.
 

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Hmm one question, why not point your domain name to x10 servers rather than load a .x10hosting.com sub-domain in a Frame. Its much better for SEO.

To do this, go to your domain registrar and use ns1.x10hosting.com and ns2.x10hosting.com as your name servers.
 

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how about adding a google map on the right side? just below the tree.. and i want a bigger fonts though.. im still young but i lean forward to read at the text. think about your older reader. thats all i can say. other than that. the site content is very well okay.
 

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Hmm one question, why not point your domain name to x10 servers rather than load a .x10hosting.com sub-domain in a Frame. Its much better for SEO.

To do this, go to your domain registrar and use ns1.x10hosting.com and ns2.x10hosting.com as your name servers.

I second that. ;)


Also, you should upload an favicon.
Probably one from favicon.cc.
 
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I appreciate all the comments. Right about the text size. Using Firefox and explorer is not a good idea. I'll be changing the size today.

Thanks again!
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Hmm one question, why not point your domain name to x10 servers rather than load a .x10hosting.com sub-domain in a Frame. Its much better for SEO.

To do this, go to your domain registrar and use ns1.x10hosting.com and ns2.x10hosting.com as your name servers.

This is why I asked for opinions...Thanks!
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how about adding a google map on the right side? just below the tree.. and i want a bigger fonts though.. im still young but i lean forward to read at the text. think about your older reader. thats all i can say. other than that. the site content is very well okay.


Map added...thanx Marley
 
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ok,

Changed a little format and added more content, forms and such.

Please cruise the site and the content. (especially the gluten free recipes 2,3,4 pages) and tell me what u think.

Appreciate all positive and negative comments.

P.S. Any suggestions on the background? Or leave it as is?

Thanks in advance for the input.

Lance
 

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Its a nice site. I would recommend you make the text a little bigger though, Kind of turns away the users who don't like to read alot. Maybe short Intro if not then bigger text.

Yeah, that's one of the things I've been looking at. Little different between IE and FF so a few problems.

Thanks
 
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