Hello, I am a new x10hosting member and I think I am one of the youngest members. I am just 16. I have created my very first website. The website isn’t that good. It is about walking for fitness and fitness guide. I have created this website mainly because of Adsense. Please review my site http://www.walkingforfitness.co.cc/ and tell me if I should change something or add something. I would really appreciate if you helped me.
Please review my site
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The site seems pretty sorted. Impressive for a first attempt.
Criticisms:
The logo byline:
One of the best sources of article about fitness.
...would be better replaced with something like:
All you need to know about health and fitness
Everything about health and fitness
..Also, I'd hoof the www.hooverwebdesign.com bit from the banner bar.
Google search box:
"Use this Search Box to find your demanding article"
huh?
I don't really like the feedzilla thing. Personal opinion.
If it were me, I wouldn't admit where I got the feeds from (about page). Why view your site when you can go to the source?
"Privacy and Policy" should be "Privacy Policy"
Pretty impressive overall
Criticisms:
The logo byline:
One of the best sources of article about fitness.
...would be better replaced with something like:
All you need to know about health and fitness
Everything about health and fitness
..Also, I'd hoof the www.hooverwebdesign.com bit from the banner bar.
Google search box:
"Use this Search Box to find your demanding article"
huh?
I don't really like the feedzilla thing. Personal opinion.
If it were me, I wouldn't admit where I got the feeds from (about page). Why view your site when you can go to the source?
"Privacy and Policy" should be "Privacy Policy"
Pretty impressive overall
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Good for a first attempt 
Did you use HTML, or something like dreamweaver or frontpage?
I would have to disagree with "welcome to", I just find it cheesy, sorry
My eyes kind of bled when looking at the article links
Apart from that, I quite like it
~Callum
Did you use HTML, or something like dreamweaver or frontpage?
I would have to disagree with "welcome to", I just find it cheesy, sorry
My eyes kind of bled when looking at the article links
Apart from that, I quite like it
~Callum
Thank you. I do know that my website is not good. But I am trying my best to create a great website. Can anybody tell how to create a website where user can create their own account like Log in or Sign up. I am trying to create a gaming website like Tittat (http://www.tmondo.com/) did. :happysad:
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playminigames
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Your site is not very 2.0ish, and i dont like the brick on the navigation bar. I dont like the colors on where the article links are, as they dont really match your site.
That site is actually powered by a cms, and that theme you would probably have to buy. I am currently building one from scratch(look at my sig if you want to check it out), and i am willing to help you out with it if you want.
Good luck nikomia!
That site is actually powered by a cms, and that theme you would probably have to buy. I am currently building one from scratch(look at my sig if you want to check it out), and i am willing to help you out with it if you want.
Good luck nikomia!
sourfacedcyclop
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You could use a CMS like Wordpress, Joomla, etc to get a log in feature. You could also use php and make a log in script. If you don't have any knowlage of php, nor the desire to learn any, I would go to the CMS route.
I like your site (http://sourfacedcyclop.com) design, template and everything. Where did you get the template or you designed it by yourself? And also did you create the login script by yourself? Is it a Joomla template or Wordpress template?