Please review my site on grammar, spelling, design, fluidness, professionalism, and whatever else you see fit.
http://ptcrewards.us.to/
http://ptcrewards.us.to/
Please review my site =]
- Thread starter LyteNight
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"What is PTC Rewards? PTC Rewards is a way of earning you bonus money for free just by signing up and using our referral links. We monitor how much you make and we add that to your account. Depending on how much you make on the site is how much you make on PTC Rewards. We currently are sponsoring two popular and professional PTC/Offer sites (Adbux and NXDaily). By using our referral link we can track how much money/clicks you make and reward you based on those values. But on some sites (such as Adbux), we will even reward you for upgrading to premium! Check out our accepted programs page for programs that will be added as they are suggested and we are okey with them."
"What is PTC Rewards? PTC Rewards is a way of earning you bonus money for free just by signing up and using our referral links. We monitor how much you make and we add that to your account. Depending on how much you make on the site is how much you make on PTC Rewards. We currently are sponsoring two popular and professional PTC/Offer sites (Adbux and NXDaily). By using our referral link we can track how much money/clicks you make and reward you based on those values. But on some sites (such as Adbux), we will even reward you for upgrading to premium! Check out our accepted programs page for programs that will be added as they are suggested and we are okey with them."
mattura
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The site appears to be down at the moment... but going on the above:
"PTC Rewards" is... OR PTC Rewards are... (you need quotes to say a plural is)
'bonus money' means nothing - perhaps 'more money'
The following two sentences are ambiguous and don't quite make sense, you may want to reword them.
Next is ok up to the end:
"Check out our accepted programs page for programs that will be added as they are suggested and we are okey with them."
would be better as:
Check out our 'Accepted Programs' page for [new/additional?] programs which will be added as they are suggested, subject to review.
"PTC Rewards" is... OR PTC Rewards are... (you need quotes to say a plural is)
'bonus money' means nothing - perhaps 'more money'
The following two sentences are ambiguous and don't quite make sense, you may want to reword them.
Next is ok up to the end:
"Check out our accepted programs page for programs that will be added as they are suggested and we are okey with them."
would be better as:
Check out our 'Accepted Programs' page for [new/additional?] programs which will be added as they are suggested, subject to review.
Sure. This time I included corrections as well.
"What is PTC Rewards? "PTC Rewards" is a way of earning you more money for no extra work (add a comma) by signing up and using our referral links. We monitor how much you make, then every Wednesday we add points to your account. Depending on how much you earn on (strike out 'the') the our affliates (incorrect word grammar; add a comma) is how much you make on PTC Rewards. We currently are sponsoring two popular and professional PTC/Offer sites (add a period.) (such as (if you're sponsoring those two then "such as" is innappropiate) Adbux and NXDaily). By using our referral links we can track how much ('many') money/clicks (the money is earned by clicks, it's redundant and breaks the grammar) you make (add a comma) and reward you based on those values. But on some sites (such as Adbux), we will even reward you for upgrading to premium! Check out our "Accepted Programs" page for all of our programs (add a period, start it as a new sentence) which will be expanded as they are suggested, subject to review."
Added/corrected your suggestions. Can you do I quick check one last time to make sure I didn't misinterpret your comments?
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"What is PTC Rewards? "PTC Rewards" is a way of earning you more money for no extra work, by signing up and using our referral links. We monitor how much you make, then every Wednesday we add points to your account. Depending on how much you earn on our affliate's (remove the apostrophe) is how much you make on PTC Rewards. We currently are sponsoring two popular and professional PTC/Offer sites. Adbux and NXDaily. By using our referral links we can track how much money, clicks, offers, upgrades, ect. you make and reward you based on those values. But on some sites (such as Adbux), we will even reward you for upgrading to premium! Check out our "Accepted Programs" page for all of our programs, which (entirely my fault, I misinterpreted the statement. Just add a comma, which I did for you.) will be expanded as they are suggested, subject to review."
Almost perfect.
"What is PTC Rewards? "PTC Rewards" is a way of earning you more money for no extra work, by signing up and using our referral links. We monitor how much you make, then every Wednesday we add points to your account. Depending on how much you earn on our affliate's (remove the apostrophe) is how much you make on PTC Rewards. We currently are sponsoring two popular and professional PTC/Offer sites. Adbux and NXDaily. By using our referral links we can track how much money, clicks, offers, upgrades, ect. you make and reward you based on those values. But on some sites (such as Adbux), we will even reward you for upgrading to premium! Check out our "Accepted Programs" page for all of our programs, which (entirely my fault, I misinterpreted the statement. Just add a comma, which I did for you.) will be expanded as they are suggested, subject to review."
Almost perfect.
mattura
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Is your site on Absolut by any chance? It seems to be down whenever I look, which is whenever my site is down (ie the past 2 days)!
Has anyone managed to see either LyteNight's or my site in the past 2 days? The server is apparently up, but I can't view the sites
Has anyone managed to see either LyteNight's or my site in the past 2 days? The server is apparently up, but I can't view the sites
My site is on Absolut. Also, whenever I view my site, it's up. Don't know why you can't view mine or your site.
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nice site i liked the template was it your own
I wish. You can click the bottom right link to go to the website where I got it.