Question on layout

[masshuu]

So i'm going to start writing some C# tutorials, i'm wondering what people think of the first page. I spent a good 2 or so hours redoing some little things on the layout of my site, then another 5 writing this single page, with most of the work trying to figure out how to write it, and going through various wysiwyg like they were hotcakes infront of my fat friend, and in the end decided to go with notepad.

So because of that, i can't guarantee that the content of the first tutorials all that great, i spent about 10 minutes writing it.
I think i'm diving into it a bit to steep. not sure if they need to know of. I might rewrite it tomorrow after i get sleep


http://www.stormraidergames.com/C-Sharp/What is C-Sharp

though if you just want to comment on the site layout, thats fine also.

 

[goldy1]

I like it, it's a good idea. There are a few spelling errors and mistypes, but I'm sure you'll get around to fixing them. Good job!

 

[playminigames]

i think its good, i actually liked your post, the only change i would have to make is the logo you cant really read it, but the content seems like it would be good.

Good Luck supermatthew