personally i like it, but what he said about the tubes, maybe try a different way to add the lines, i think their is some tutorials on
http://www.good-tutorials.com or on
http://www.Pixel2life.com and also, lose the indents, im not feeling those, other than that good job, like what civilr said, 7/10
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Take that back, integrated into your webpage it looks nice, the only thing is, i suck at espanol, so i cannot read your actual site, PS. i don't really liek your font, its too sharp
