Review My Site http://toxicpets.co.cc

essellar

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Oh, good -- "MYSTery meat navigation". Why does the owl statue mean "adopt a pet"? Why is the bridge my "House"?

I get it, it's a game. Your landing page shouldn't be part of the game. And there should be some sort of intuitive correspondence between the things you click on and what those things represent.

The site logo is not even close to being in the same class as the game graphics, and the purely typographical elements don't blend into the rest of the site design at all. There's a lot of work left to do here, I'm afraid. Don't take that as dismissive -- do the work. The game may be worth the effort (it's certainly no worse a concept than any of the Zynga games), but the design is really holding it back.
 

xcorphz

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is that site of yours a gaming site? did you make it? ^_^
 

callumacrae

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It's rubbish. Your html is all invalid, and it looks awful. Do it again from scratch.

Sorry to be blunt, but it's how it is :)

~Callum
 

chris33

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It's rubbish. Your html is all invalid, and it looks awful. Do it again from scratch.

Sorry to be blunt, but it's how it is :)

~Callum
Did i tell you he spent £30 on the site code, none of it's his. it's only there to rival my work in progress site http://scipets.co.cc :mad:

Sorry to be like this but it makes more sense if I say I know this pirate bay addict in person (and before he trys to be smart in his reply that type of website anyway)
 

mosimages

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Good job...but..
I don't get the "Unity" feel between your web design concept and games concept there...:)
 
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