review the layout

[matthew9090]

please can you review my site? i am working on a browser game and i need you to review the home page and the other pages. There is no game just yet though :frown:

matthew9090.x10hosting.com

 

[shant93]

It looks very nice, it's just that it could use some lighter text, but not white, and maybe a bit more visual structure. Whitespace is good but not too much.

 

[matthew9090]

thanks

 

[trekkieben2007]

The site is looking pretty good. What kind of program did you use to create the site? Thanks!

 

[indysbirds92]

Looking good! It's a good start.

One thing that I would suggest would be to remove much of the white space between the words "Interplanetary War" and the menu, it's a little distracting. I am using google chrome so that may make a difference.

 

[trekkieben2007]

Looking good! It's a good start.

One thing that I would suggest would be to remove much of the white space between the words "Interplanetary War" and the menu, it's a little distracting. I am using google chrome so that may make a difference.

I'm using Firefox, and I see the same thing.