Serene OverloaD Game Story

[Coldfirezz]

Hello everyone! I am currently working on a story for my game called Serene Overload. You may read the story here: http://sod.futurestarhosting.net/forums.php?tid=22. I am looking for some feedback for what I have so far. Thank you.


~!Coldfirezz

 

[lair360]

Hey Coldfire! Good luck!!

 

[Coldfirezz]

What did you think of the Story?

 

[lair360]

What did you think of the Story?

Pretty good start. But, the missile part...its a little confusing.

That is all...

 

[Coldfirezz]

Pretty good start. But, the missile part...its a little confusing.

That is all...

Thank you. I will try to clarify that part.