Two of my business templates

[firedavid98]

i would like to receive some reviews and cc on two of my latest templates i have done. my main question is do u think any of these two have potential to actually become a real business website that i can use, if so which one.

1st (only done with first page): http://swagblog.co.cc/

2nd: http://swagblog.co.cc/dm

thanks!