What do you think? ;)

[FalseHope]

Well, I have looked and commented and reviewed websites here. So I am going to ask you guys what you think of mine. It's not completely done. I am doing bits at a time, each day. The links button doesn't work yet, and the IRC page needs to be re-done, two things of which I am aware of. The site is for an alliance/clan for a text based game called Kingdoms Divided.
The link: http://gummiebear.net
So, what do you think of it?

 

[42type]

Its really nice, I love the colours the layout could use some more direction and the ad at the top break the page images. And one more thing, even on my high speed internet it took a few minutes to load the images, try using smaller images.

But other than that I like it!

 

[ThePaintGuru]

I like it, although the top banner ad ruins it. I would suggest placing it somewhere else if x10 allows that (not familiar with ad enhanced plan).

 

[Sohail]

Well i really like the graphics but maybe you should consider something about that as it does take quite a while to load... Plus the advertisement at the top ruins the alignment of the whole site.

If you fixed that i would give your site 8/10

 

[LHVWB]

It looks okay, although the light white text on a gray background is difficult to see Ii'm using firefox)

The IRC java app takes up too much space, and the links page doesn't seem to work.

Also the site looks weird because it only takes up half of the screen, as if there is no footer.

 

[FalseHope]

If you read my post you would have seen what I said about those two pages. Yes, I see that the ad is ruining the page. I am not on any "ad" plan, that is just an ad sense banner. I was just trying it out. As for the images, I could try and resize them, or use less or something. Thanks for the comments.

 

[gazzamc]

I checked out your site it's nice.....Took ages to load tho.you should change the color of the text.and try using .gif for your pics if your not already.yea it is also only takes up half of my page on firefox and looks weird.

But overall great job

 

[FalseHope]

I don't see how it's loading slow for you guys, it loads fine for me in both FF and IE.

 

[satheesh]

It load slow for me.
Nice site.
7/10

 

[sunils]

Its taking some times for loading. To tell about the site, i dont like an ad on my header. Other than that its good. Though the letters look little dim because of the dark background, its ok.

Important thing to do first:-

Change the title

 

[FalseHope]

Change the title? Why? The title looks fine to me :s explain

 

[sunils]

I meant the advt in the header. Could have moved to some other location.

 

[gazzamc]

Change the title? Why? The title looks fine to me :s explain

Mike i think he may have read your title wrong maybe they thought it was named untitled not united........

 

[FalseHope]

Anyone have any ideas on where I might move the advertisement?
That's what I thought, gazzamc

 

[sunils]

I think in your main boundary itself. Something like a vertical box in any of the bottom corners. I didnt get the complete page i think. Did you leave the bottom part abruptly .is it that how you have designed or its due to slow network.

 

[FalseHope]

I haven't made a footer yet. That's why.

 

[vena123]

well what can i say nice site,but then i see a halo 2 logo,noooo halo 2 is for little boys,
but loving the site dude well:drool:done

 

[FalseHope]

Font color has been changed and the size is bigger in some spots. Still thinking if I should keep the ad, or move it, or just remove them all together.

 

[sunils]

I would suggest remove them all together.

 

[FalseHope]

Alright, all ads have been removed. I am working on doing the footer now. Thanks for the suggestions. Any more?