I think its fantastic and simple. I think your type of simple is boringi say make it simpler. get rid of that woman it's not helping at all
what i meant was to replace that freaky looking woman with a much simpler elements because one thing you need to consider is how is it going to look when it's finalized and printed or you guys don't have any idea about pre-press production?If you removed the women then the business card would just be a black piece of paper with a name and contact details on it.
all i can say is been there, done that..I think its fantastic and simple. I think your type of simple is boring
to me, the women looks kind of freaky. she just staring, but staring at what??? idk, but it just freaks me out with the paint.. but all in all it looks really nice. the colors match perfectly.