There is lots of room for improvement. First off, I would never pay a site that doesn't capitalize the first letter of the sentence, and doesn't have their own logo. On the join us page you need to keep the font the same. Next off, you need an e-commerce script not email me. And, where will you be advertising. How bout some demos of the sites will be on. Honestly, majorly improve this site or scrap the whole site and idea. Poorly thought out, and poorly executed. Not meaning to be rude.