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Hey, I've been working a website called battybible the idea is just a simple quotes website that fines funny/weird quotes from the bible.

if anyone could give me some ideas on how to improve it I'd very much appreciated it.


http://battybible.com
 

cybrax

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Well.. at the risk of offending the entire christian faith I'd say what it needs is pictures.
Something perhaps in the 'De-motivational' style, though it may be a bit tricky for some of
those quotes.

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Hey, I've been working a website called battybible the idea is just a simple quotes website that fines funny/weird quotes from the bible.

if anyone could give me some ideas on how to improve it I'd very much appreciated it.


http://battybible.com

Grammar fixes:

You should refer to it as your "Quotations" website. A quote is more ambiguous than a quotation - a quote website sounds like it is used to estimate costs. And definitely not a quote's website (the apostrophe is bad here).

The blurb should re-written. For example, the title has a spelling and grammatical error (Some Very Strange Biblical Passages, NOT Some Very Strange and Bibilical Passages).

If you are struggling with English, you should put all your text through a spell / grammar check before you publish.
 
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