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nirajkum

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it seems good please add more content and you can also improve your color combination
 

hrvat

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This site is full animation effects which distract user attention, wrong choice of color, wrong text sizes and shapes. It is only critic !
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John Klyne

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....http://www.alalawa.com/services.html Brochure Websites... as low as 7,999 ......I'm confused, is that 7.9k USD for a site? ...I'd love to see a screenshot or demo of some of your work.

I like the site you have...I would just say...make the menu images, NOT pop up soo big...so that it doesn't distract users too much...I was more concentrated on the images then the content I was hoping to find.

Nice design though...just a big distracting...(I would personally get rid of the pop up images of the menu..other than that NICE WORK :)
 
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John Klyne

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Ah so it's just 177.76 USD... that's more reasonable heh.

I like the concept of the site...I hope you stick to it, and make some cold calls to potential clients...I'm sure there are plenty of people who would love to use your service.

I am currently helping this kid (he's only 16)... He knows NO scripting language (just like myself heh)...

Anyways...I'm helping him make some money online at my membership site http://youngmoney.lagronsinc.com (a membership site for 97$ a month)... Well the online business idea I have given him, makes him 199$ a sale, per about 15-20 cold calls he makes to potential clients/meets up with. With your services...and your scripting knowledge...since you did well with your site, I am sure you'll be interested...

(Basically) this message was created for me to make 1 more sale :) ? With the 97$ a month membership, I'll give you the information.

I know for a fact it'll work for you...basically you have already set up everything...you just need to finally get to doing X that I'll tell you...that I would like to share with you for 97$ a month...(heck just cancel after the first month if you like...and I'll give you a 100% REFUND, as John Klyne, of X10hosting Forums, and owner of Young Money Inc., run by Lagron's Inc.) When you make that first sale...let me just say...you'll make a $ 102.00 profit on your first sale (I deducted the cost of my membership site information...)

I'm helping this 16 year old, get himself 199$ a sale, and residual monthly income per sale ever made...and I'm doing it with him, drafting a step-by-step guide for us to follow tomorrow.

Private Message me if you like, or just sign up at http://youngmoney.lagronsinc.com ALSO...do not worry about your AGE...(though I gear towards helping people under 21 make money online, (hence Young Money Inc. ) but I'll help you as well if you are above that age.
 
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