Yet another design

[rkalhans]

hey people I have made yet another design and i would love if you all will review it, EVERY comment suggestion and criticism will be welcomed.
CLICK HERE

 

[ShadowmasterX]

Very nice, nice and clean but its kinda bright on the eyes, well for me anyway =P

 

[galacticgraphix]

Hello rkalhans

I had a look at your site and I didn't find it hard on the eyes, in fact, the opposite. Very peaceful and passive. I have been in the print and design industry for over 25 years so it is a habit for me to proof read type for errors. I did find a couple on your first page which I am sure you would like to correct, so that your viewer's get a good first impression of you and your service. The errors are: prusuing s/b pursuing, die-heart s/b die hard, meintioning s/b mentioning. I hope this is helpful to you. My business motto is "First Impressions Last!"

Cindy :happysad:

 

[rkalhans]

Hey the content is yet to be figured out I wrote something as I need to have some content and that too was written aroung 4 in the morning without the influence of coffee I wll rectify the mistakes though. And thanks for the comments
do post in more comments and suggestions