First things first. I like the site you have.
I love the lightning in the homepage and the over all color and such. I would rate your site a 9.5 (Not a 10...since I know everything can be improved, and nothing is ever perfect)
I like your latest work as well...(Can you make 3d images?...possibly some things that can be input into games)Can you make your designs/work "different" by making them be animated? I am just tossing up questions, as I beleive you have potential for something else I have in mind.
Your contact me page, is basically a way for people to contact you through e-mail...well, let me say this, add yourself a legitamate address and phone number/fax number if available.
It adds security to your site...other people don't give these things, because, they may hide something, in my opinion, well you don't want that though to occur in other potential customers do you?? Well you have to sell yourself, in order to get clients, you need to be a good salespersons...to show you are good, YOU NEED to make sure, you are doing your best work, on your site, ( I like it, but say this...is it really your best work)...the site is a way to get clients, and sell yourself...so overall...NICE SITE, I like it, ...
BUT, add more to the contact me page...the about me page, should also have more...I know the site is probably still under construction, but don't quit, make it stand out, make it appealing.
You offer tons of services...that I would love to get my hands on...but thing is, the showcase...once again, I think you are just starting out...even if you did not create something for someone else, get more content on that showcase...show off some of your flash work, on your site as well.
I beleive you need a services offered page. I can only see what you are really offering when I click on about you, or contact you...
Well the only reason I would want to click on those things, is if I had a reason to. Yea please re-read that...you have to make me want to click on that...the first thing we will click on is, the services offered page, if there was one, or the showcase page. Add that services offered page, and I bet you can get yourself some more sales, since now there is more information about what you do. The more information we get, the better are you chances of us being your prospective client.
You have to sell yourself, to get prospective clients.
GOOD WORK THOUGH, I like it, but I know you can improve it, and make it your best work, as I see, with what I pointed out, it has yet to be your best.
You can do it, keep up the good work!
EDIT: Make yourself more professional... the ( ...here...here...and ...here) are not attractive and will make you look less professional, and more like an ameture. Sorry on spelling.
EDIT: Was wondering, I will give you one word, or phrase, or name, related to one of my sites.
Do you think you want to just play around and test making me a logo. I will not use it, unless I compensate you for it first.
Here are a couple different logo's I am trying to find someone to make me.
logo one.....The word is "Lagron"
It is the name of the site, and will act as a header. The color schemes you can use, are a combination of dark or lighter, green, purple,yellow,gold,black,blue,orange
logo two is....Secrets!
Color scheme is the same as above.
Logo three is....Opinion or Your Opinion,
logo four....Your Voice, Speak Your Mind
Color schemes can be the same as above...they all don't have to be in the same logo, you can choose one or 2 colors, or work with shades of 1 or whatever...
Not sure if you would like to try it, but if so. : )
Just trying to raise the amount "work" you can show on your showcase..
Lets see if you really want to have your site sent on a traffic spree. Having a link in everyone of my sites. If what you create is accepted, do you mind if I have you/your site talked about/critiqued on one of my sites.
